Saturday 11 October, 2008

Carriage return, line feed

Filed under: BBC blunders, Grammar etc.

I read with interest and some amusement today's news of Luc Costermans breaking the world blind road speed record.

My favourite part of the article was the paragraph-hungry BBC's decision to separate these two sentences into two paragraphs.

Two years ago Mr Costermans completed a tour of France piloting a light aeroplane.

He was accompanied by an instructor and a navigator.

Surely the second sentence is a sufficient qualification of the first to negate the need for the carriage return, line feed.


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